Ulet's Digital Storytelling


Welcome to my digital story telling, which is based on my piece entitled, The Best Birthday Ever.  Taken from my Writing portfolio, The Best Birthday Ever is a descriptive piece which encapsulates the experience of a birthday girl at one of her favourite spots, the beach. I do hope that I impress you with this one. Special thanks to Jahim Etienne and George Alexander for helping this project come to fruition. 





Comments

  1. Ylet, your happy mood clearly rubbed off on me because I danced throughout your entire introduction. This is a brilliant descriptive piece, I was able to paint a vivid picture in my mind of Maria's experience. Your choice of adjectives, intonation, background music and graphics really made your writing come alive. I did not anticipate such a twist in your piece because of that happy mood you set in your title, introduction and in the beginning of your piece. I predicted that happy mood throughout then BOOM, that happy feeling turned out to be distressful. I must commend you, this was beautifully crafted. Job well done!

    NB: Am looking forward to reading that first book of yours in the near future.

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    1. Thank you much Tamara. I am glad that I was able to impress you with this one. As for writing books, I am not certain about that although I have a passion for writing. But who knows I may just reconsider.

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  2. I got chills. If your words did not portray the sudden turn of events, your voice certainly did. Beautiful done. I applaud this piece. Well Done Ylet.

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    1. Thanks a million Brittany. It brings me joy to know that my piece evoked such effect on you.

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  3. Excellent Piece Ylet! I enjoyed this piece and the soothing background sound. Additionally, this piece can be used to teach various content area subjects across the primary curriculum. I also want to encourage you to continue writing and putting your good work into practice!

    Well Done!

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  4. Thank you Ylet for sharing. You have created a good podcast. The language is a bit mature for the grade level for whom the piece was designed.

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