Soria Cornibert narrative audio story
This video shares the experience of five young boys who detest school. As teachers we need to be cognizant of the behaviours we display in the classroom because they can negatively impact on students' motivation to attend school. This leads to disruptive and unacceptable behaviours carried out by these students. We should all bear this in mind.
Creating this video at some points seemed impossible and very difficult but through perseverance and my tenacity and God's grace it was completed. This is why I have this product created. I hope you enjoy listening and viewing the content.
The audience
This piece was created specifically for grade three students who will be engaging in story writing.
Purpose of this piece
This piece was created to use as an instructional resource to help students to identify the story grammar to aid students in creating narrative pieces. Students will be able to pull out the elements of a story to produce their own piece. Further, it can also be used to teach students about the effects or consequences of disobedience.
Good job! I am sure this piece will enable you to accomplish your objectives for your grade three students.
ReplyDeleteVery Good Soria! I loved your introduction and I loved how you used those adjectives to describe Bexon. This story is very relatable and I am sure the students will enjoy it just as I did. Your images and tone were very appropriate.
ReplyDeleteAgain, well done Soria!
Interesting introduction. I thoroughly enjoyed your piece .
ReplyDeleteNasha John
I enjoyed this piece, well written and performed. You were on point with organization and your performers were fluent, intonation was very good. Job well done Soria! I can see that everything you do, you always give it your best shot, keep it up!!!
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A very detailed piece Soria. The fact that you used different narrators throughout your piece enabled me to be attentive from the beginning to end. I was certainly hooked.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Soria! Having different narrators helped contribute to the jazziness of this piece. This piece will surely help you achieve the stated objective.
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Thanks for sharing Sorria. This is a very good story that you have composed. Perhaps some graphical and musical enhancers would have made viewing and listening to the story a lot more enticing, don't you think so? Good effort nonetheless.
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